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Submitted on
October 13, 2011
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Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Shutter Speed
1/50 second
Focal Length
46 mm
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Date Taken
Jun 12, 2011, 12:24:39 PM
Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows
Sensor Size
Carlotta in the kitchen 01 by DR0ck Carlotta in the kitchen 01 by DR0ck
Carlotta Champagne
All mature comments and critiques welcomed and appreciated!
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It's hard to find weaknesses, if you have the picture of a real goddess in front of you. The aesthetics of the girl are overwhelming. Yes, she's beautiful and sexual attractive, but that's not the thing I want to write about. I want to say something about the artistic quality of the picture. We are inside a citchen, but the background is not important and fuzzy. Even the clock cannot be seen clearly, but I don't care about that. 12:25 or something like that? It's of no importance. That concentrates the attraction to her. My eyes are caught by her aura. The center of the picture is the valley between her breasts. Oh, dear, I try to look somewhere else, otherwise I won't criticize at all. Seriously, although she is not naked an erotic feeling cannot be denied. Her eyes are looking to the right, far away, her expression is neutral. Anyway the erotic aftertaste is existent even though she does nothing to reinforce it - for example by touching her breasts or her neck or hair or whatever. There are two things that derange me a little bit: her left hand is cut and I would prefer to see it complete. Her legs are behind the board, so it's ok. Then, second, the red thing on the right. What is it? If it is important, then we want to see - if not, it has to be removed before taking the shot. Another thing I want to mention but even me I'm not sure about that is the left part of the picture. We see some sort of passage to the next room. It could be better to cut it, because then we have no world outside the citchen. In this case we have only the room - the window (?) to the right is cloudy and not really an entrance to the outer world - and the girl which dominates in totality. But it's a really fine peace of art. Continue like that.
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deviantear Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
I mean the picture caused me a deep feeling, made me feel that beauty exists, it is amazing how highlights the model in the picture, around the edge of her body has very special shine and her face makes you miss in it, thanks for take the shot
DR0ck Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you sir!
sylviaD Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
I know you said mature comments only but I want to take her to dinner. :D
DR0ck Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
That is quite mature compared to many and a completely understandable sentiment :)
sylviaD Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
But...I wonder what she would order?! :D
DR0ck Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Good question!
sylviaD Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
I'd just get a Caesar salad with chicken and spend my time staring into her eyes.
DR0ck Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Hehe, sounds good on both counts :)
sylviaD Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
...but enough silliness I suppose. :)
VeryLargeRodent Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
More front lighting and less makeup.  Otherwise it's well-nigh perfect.
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