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Carlotta in the kitchen 01 by DR0ck Carlotta in the kitchen 01 by DR0ck
Carlotta Champagne
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It's hard to find weaknesses, if you have the picture of a real goddess in front of you. The aesthetics of the girl are overwhelming. Yes, she's beautiful and sexual attractive, but that's not the thing I want to write about. I want to say something about the artistic quality of the picture. We are inside a citchen, but the background is not important and fuzzy. Even the clock cannot be seen clearly, but I don't care about that. 12:25 or something like that? It's of no importance. That concentrates the attraction to her. My eyes are caught by her aura. The center of the picture is the valley between her breasts. Oh, dear, I try to look somewhere else, otherwise I won't criticize at all. Seriously, although she is not naked an erotic feeling cannot be denied. Her eyes are looking to the right, far away, her expression is neutral. Anyway the erotic aftertaste is existent even though she does nothing to reinforce it - for example by touching her breasts or her neck or hair or whatever. There are two things that derange me a little bit: her left hand is cut and I would prefer to see it complete. Her legs are behind the board, so it's ok. Then, second, the red thing on the right. What is it? If it is important, then we want to see - if not, it has to be removed before taking the shot. Another thing I want to mention but even me I'm not sure about that is the left part of the picture. We see some sort of passage to the next room. It could be better to cut it, because then we have no world outside the citchen. In this case we have only the room - the window (?) to the right is cloudy and not really an entrance to the outer world - and the girl which dominates in totality. But it's a really fine peace of art. Continue like that.
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deviantear Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
I mean the picture caused me a deep feeling, made me feel that beauty exists, it is amazing how highlights the model in the picture, around the edge of her body has very special shine and her face makes you miss in it, thanks for take the shot
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you sir!
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sylviaD Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
I know you said mature comments only but I want to take her to dinner. :D
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
That is quite mature compared to many and a completely understandable sentiment :)
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sylviaD Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
But...I wonder what she would order?! :D
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:icondr0ck:
DR0ck Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Good question!
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sylviaD Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
I'd just get a Caesar salad with chicken and spend my time staring into her eyes.
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:icondr0ck:
DR0ck Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Hehe, sounds good on both counts :)
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sylviaD Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
...but enough silliness I suppose. :)
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VeryLargeRodent Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
More front lighting and less makeup.  Otherwise it's well-nigh perfect.
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:icondr0ck:
DR0ck Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Much appreciated feedback, thank you :)
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Kapplin7 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
I'd definately love to do some cooking with her.
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:icondr0ck:
DR0ck Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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moramoracr7 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
wonderfull pic.
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:icondr0ck:
DR0ck Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks :)
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fotoheini Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Photographer
beautiful Model...like the Pose, Light and Location...great shot
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:icondr0ck:
DR0ck Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks so much!
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FluffyLover1986 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
Looks like one of Susan Coffey's outfits actually =P.

No, but in all honesty, Carly's one of the most gorgeous models there is. Definitely the best brunette.
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:icondr0ck:
DR0ck Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :)
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FluffyLover1986 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
Welcome. You come to the New York area often? There's a redhead that looks about as good as Carly up there :O
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I cant say Ive been but I would love to see her. Link her to me sometime, thanks :)
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FluffyLover1986 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
:iconcatropo:. She's like Disney's Ariel, or Jean Grey. Ideal as far as redheads go.
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you, very nice :)
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FluffyLover1986 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
Welcome.
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lookupone Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012
Elle a du carisme
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:icondr0ck:
DR0ck Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :)
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katherinemagpie Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Professional General Artist
She is so beautiful. Her curves are wonderfully delicate, her gaze is intense. God, the things I'd give to be this beautiful.
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
I just realized I cant tell how old you are so feel free not to answer this as well!
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much for the kind words, very much appreciate your feelings and insight. :)
Out of curiosity do you think that if you had a similar external beauty that you would also be a model and possibly pose nude for art?
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katherinemagpie Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Professional General Artist
Well, to answer your question, I'm 18. One of my friends set up my account and had the wrong year listed for my birthday, so it still says I'm underaged. And while I'd be honored to model for you, I'm a little chunkier than most. Although if you're ever in Colorado Springs, feel free to look me up, I'd love to meet with you.
Kati
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh ok :) I mean it was really just a hypothetical question, basically, what would you do with that type of beauty if it were yours?
I didnt see any age at all on your page which was why I wasnt sure. And I shoot all different body type, it really more about the model wants to be captured that I want to make happen. I dont really travel much but it sounds like a nice place. Thanks for replying!
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katherinemagpie Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Professional General Artist
If I had that beauty, I'd do nudes and drapes.

Like I said, if you're ever out this way, feel free to look me up, or send me an email @ katikatastrophe@yahoo.com

Have a nice weekend
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Cool, was just curious and will do :) You too.
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katherinemagpie Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Professional General Artist
I will.
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VinRoc Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
You captured here cures and subtle looks so perfectly here.
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful, thank you :)
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VinRoc Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Anytime man!
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calvinatour Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011
stunning as always love all the natural colours and just the naturalness of Carlotta
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Naturalness is my fave too :)
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nejo233 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
shes the bomb :woohoo:
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Hehe thanks! :bomb:
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xMaverick0x Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SHE looks beautiful!! if she wore like an apron wow.. sexiness on the kitchen
her stare is very deep.. if she somehow turned just her eyes at the camera with such intensity
would be like WOW!!
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Im glad you see it this way also, thank you :)
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igs Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011
she is amazing every time. never stop photographing her :lol:
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much!
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MattBerri Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Professional Photographer
Beautiful shot. Love the position of the model and the colors. It has a softness to it that is hard to capture. Well done.
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks so much!
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KhidirIshitar Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011
Is something wrong? She isn't making anything!
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DR0ck Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
lol, yeah she was trying to remember where to find her clothes before that ;)
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Flamepixy Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Her expression at that angle shows off the features of her face very well. She has a very nice figure for certain. I also love the tones in her hair and the way her sidepart follows the contours of her body in the photo. The hand on her hip is elegantly coiled over her hip bone, almost like she's absent-mindedly exploring the texture of the fabric beneath her fingertips. Something that I noticed belated about the photo is that the cutting board and the tiles on the floor compliment her skintone nicely. The hints of orange-red and red in the background highlight the same colors in her clothing. As for the emotion of the piece, the tone is almost but not quite sad. I brindled a little bit at the beginning when viewing this piece simply because of the whole derogatory "Woman in the Kitchen" idea coupled with the "Yay Mostly-Naked Hot Chick" connotation. Despite that, it's a beautiful piece :) Well done.
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