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Carlotta in the kitchen 01

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Carlotta Champagne
All mature comments and critiques welcomed and appreciated!
Image size
3744x5616px 9.18 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Shutter Speed
1/50 second
Aperture
F/3.2
Focal Length
46 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jun 12, 2011, 12:24:39 PM
Sensor Size
24mm
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

It's hard to find weaknesses, if you have the picture of a real goddess in front of you. The aesthetics of the girl are overwhelming. Yes, she's beautiful and sexual attractive, but that's not the thing I want to write about. I want to say something about the artistic quality of the picture. We are inside a citchen, but the background is not important and fuzzy. Even the clock cannot be seen clearly, but I don't care about that. 12:25 or something like that? It's of no importance. That concentrates the attraction to her. My eyes are caught by her aura. The center of the picture is the valley between her breasts. Oh, dear, I try to look somewhere else, otherwise I won't criticize at all. Seriously, although she is not naked an erotic feeling cannot be denied. Her eyes are looking to the right, far away, her expression is neutral. Anyway the erotic aftertaste is existent even though she does nothing to reinforce it - for example by touching her breasts or her neck or hair or whatever. There are two things that derange me a little bit: her left hand is cut and I would prefer to see it complete. Her legs are behind the board, so it's ok. Then, second, the red thing on the right. What is it? If it is important, then we want to see - if not, it has to be removed before taking the shot. Another thing I want to mention but even me I'm not sure about that is the left part of the picture. We see some sort of passage to the next room. It could be better to cut it, because then we have no world outside the citchen. In this case we have only the room - the window (?) to the right is cloudy and not really an entrance to the outer world - and the girl which dominates in totality. But it's a really fine peace of art. Continue like that.